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Shippers are crazy!

Journal Entry: Sat Nov 17, 2012, 5:27 AM
...they write beautiful shorts:

By Tchernobog, I think it's way too beautiful to not share here:

Applejack shivered slightly as she trotted through the snow. She'd left her trust hat at home, mostly because Rainbow Dash had dragged her out of the house before she could grab it. She had however managed to lay a hoof on a scarf, and was glad for its warmth. She figured that warmth was half because of the material it was made of, and half because it was the scarf Rainbow had made her, shocking her with the thoughtfulness and the craftsmanship. It was like Rainbow had taken her tail, turned it into wool, and knitted a scarf out of it. Not one stitch out of place.

Applejack suspected a white unicorn may have helped, but she kept that idea to herself. The thought and gesture counted for so much more.

Rainbow, who had been jumping around in the snow like an eager foal, stopped her frolicking as her eyes locked on Applejack's. The orange mare recognized the look in the pegasus' eyes a split second before the latter leapt, tackling the earth pony and sending them both rolling into the snow. They laughed as they tussled, wrestling as they often did when alone. The small kisses that pecked each other's faces and necks were another set of gestures that appeared when they were alone.
As they got tired, Rainbow rolled off of Applejack, propping her head on one hoof. Applejack crossed her own forelegs behind her head, and rested it upon the snow as she turned to look at Rainbow.

The pegasus bit her lip, then lifted a hoof, leaning over the earth pony. Applejack shivered, expecting the hoof to touch her belly, but raised an eyebrow as it passed over her. Rainbow's hoof touched the snow, and gently pushed it through, tracing a line upwards from Applejack's body. She repeated the motion two more times, before leaning back to where she'd been resting. There, she went through the same motions, biting her lip the entire time.

Finally, as Rainbow's hoof traced the last path, Applejack recognized the pattern. The pegasus had given her a beautiful gift, only possible in winter, with the land covered as it was.

Applejack lay on the ground, sporting a pair of snow-white wings.

Those Snowwhite Wings by RatofDrawn

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cherryjjv Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How do you italicize??? I need to know for a story o:
PaletteOfRainbows Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Awww, how cute! :heart:
zWalruz Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist much d'awww
AnukWolf Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Awww that's awesome :)
Tcherno did an amazing job here, once again :)
ArcCahlon Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love that short story on the pic it fits so well, its sad its so short its well done it makes you want to hear more.
Tchernobyl Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
I restricted myself to under 500 words for it. Not much more is needed :)
ArcCahlon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
part of me understands, the other wishes you would of done more. love your stories, even the short ones like with this pic
zora-artist Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
X3 oh my god!
so sweet!
Tcherno is awesome!! =D
great that you shared it rat!
katarjin Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
yes we are
TheWanderer93 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Awesomesauce 8D
kxp71 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
words can not explain how amazing that was
ElwisFromPoland Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
A shrot story based on your pic? I think that was cute. :)

:empllama: :eyepopping: :emplllama:
Icon made by ~legendarydragon90
Buchi04 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
The funny thing is.....the pic is based on another fic of tchernobog xD I hope its a neverending circle ^^
Buchi04 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Eeyup, we are xD

I read it already, its sooooo cute. I love all the prompt tag stories <3
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